6Haikus:
1. moon- under the rooftop
here i am standing lonely
under the moonlight.
2. moon- sitting on my desk
listening to the music
i look at the moon.
3. moon- Looking at the moon
I gladly smile at the moon.
the moon also smiles back.
4. moon- right under the moon,
the moon that shines down on me
i'm searching for you.
5. moon- Lost in the Forest
in such a pitch black forest,
but the moon saved me.
6. moon- the moon I've waited,
finally showed up.
what a happy day.
These poems are Haikus. The #1 moon poem is when I am very lonely. When i have some sad problems. The #2 moon poem is when I am studying usually and listening to the music.The #3 moon poem is when I am in a very happy moon I look out from the window from my apartment.The #4 moon poem is when I liked a girl and when I was walking to her house. The #5 and #6 is a poem that I just imagined of and It's basically about moon helping you out from a dark forest and to show that I am in a happy mood.
2011년 3월 13일 일요일
shape poem 2
This is a poem of myself getting bored in English class writing the poem.
in Enlgish class, I usually listen to musics and write the poem but I realize that the time goes so slow as if it's stuck. So I tried to describe that English session to write a funny poem and I think most people feel similar like me too. Kids don't really like studying.
I hope that people agree reading this poem.
4sonnets (2 pet, 2 shakespear)
2Petrarchan:
1. Drum
I was tending to be considering
What kind of a stylish drum should buy?
Playing the drum, think I'm gonna be shy.
I was talking to my self , murmuring.
I was also worrying about it.
Want to have a drum like the drum of that guy.
What kind of a drum did that guy buy?
I was in a mood of such crest falling.
My great drum teacher has answered.
If i get to choose, this drum would be good.
It is also in a such a good price.
Looked around a little and my mouth opened.
With in a good mood, i said thats good dude!
I finally bought a drum that is nice.
2. Poem
Why are we told to write something like this?
How are we really supposed to write it?
I don't think it's the right time to stay sit.
Would you now like to be helping me miss?
Can I write,'It's sweeter than a women's kiss'?
But I do not think that it is going to fit.
I beg you miss, can you stop trying to hit?
Writing a poem,,what a hard thing it is.
We write it to learn how to use rhyming words.
You will get it when you just try your best.
Who do you think said to sit? Do your work!
You can just think of any rhyming words.
You can just try to think about the test.
Quiet! Before I stab you with a fork!
2Shakespearean:
1.
MUSIC
O dear my lovely music I love it.
All with such an interesting melody.
O and as well, I can here the drums hit.
And sounds like a beautiful parody.
Thy all of use listen all together
We dance and party looking at each other.
Can see the grins on the chair from the pit.
I love the noise as well as the beat.
Wow! Look at them enjoying the party.
I want to listen and also like to eat.
I would like to play the drums like I'm crazy.
But yet, the music isn't over.
It's gonna end even if it's never.
2. Flower
Look at that, What a beautiful flower.
Through the sunrise the flower, can see.
If that's pretty, how wonderful could be her?
Thy the feeling of love within me.
This is the first time writing of my heart.
But the red roses I see in her cheek.
About it there are some beautiful part.
I think I cannot stop starting to peak.
You are the one who I've been waiting for.
I can never live along without you.
I only want you no less nor no more.
A girl like you, there are only a few.
Can you accept my proposal girl?
My heart suddenly start is trying to curl
Petrarchan
The poem DRUM is my self describing the time when I was buying the drum.
At the moment of myself buying the drum, I felt very glad but I was also trying to look for a stylish drum. I also asked my drum teacher about the sounds. My drum teacher chose me a good drum also in a right price. I personally like this poem because I love to play drum.
I hope you understand my feeling about this Poem.
Shakespearean
The poem named POEM, is a poem when I was writing these many poems. I had to think very much on writing all these poems because each and every poem needs ideas not just simple ones but mostly complicated ideas. I think everybody agrees with this poem because no student likes to make long boring poems, but I still enjoyed in writing this poem because I could actually express my personal feelings when I'm writing poems.
1. Drum
I was tending to be considering
What kind of a stylish drum should buy?
Playing the drum, think I'm gonna be shy.
I was talking to my self , murmuring.
I was also worrying about it.
Want to have a drum like the drum of that guy.
What kind of a drum did that guy buy?
I was in a mood of such crest falling.
My great drum teacher has answered.
If i get to choose, this drum would be good.
It is also in a such a good price.
Looked around a little and my mouth opened.
With in a good mood, i said thats good dude!
I finally bought a drum that is nice.
2. Poem
Why are we told to write something like this?
How are we really supposed to write it?
I don't think it's the right time to stay sit.
Would you now like to be helping me miss?
Can I write,'It's sweeter than a women's kiss'?
But I do not think that it is going to fit.
I beg you miss, can you stop trying to hit?
Writing a poem,,what a hard thing it is.
We write it to learn how to use rhyming words.
You will get it when you just try your best.
Who do you think said to sit? Do your work!
You can just think of any rhyming words.
You can just try to think about the test.
Quiet! Before I stab you with a fork!
2Shakespearean:
1.
MUSIC
O dear my lovely music I love it.
All with such an interesting melody.
O and as well, I can here the drums hit.
And sounds like a beautiful parody.
Thy all of use listen all together
We dance and party looking at each other.
Can see the grins on the chair from the pit.
I love the noise as well as the beat.
Wow! Look at them enjoying the party.
I want to listen and also like to eat.
I would like to play the drums like I'm crazy.
But yet, the music isn't over.
It's gonna end even if it's never.
2. Flower
Look at that, What a beautiful flower.
Through the sunrise the flower, can see.
If that's pretty, how wonderful could be her?
Thy the feeling of love within me.
This is the first time writing of my heart.
But the red roses I see in her cheek.
About it there are some beautiful part.
I think I cannot stop starting to peak.
You are the one who I've been waiting for.
I can never live along without you.
I only want you no less nor no more.
A girl like you, there are only a few.
Can you accept my proposal girl?
My heart suddenly start is trying to curl
Petrarchan
The poem DRUM is my self describing the time when I was buying the drum.
At the moment of myself buying the drum, I felt very glad but I was also trying to look for a stylish drum. I also asked my drum teacher about the sounds. My drum teacher chose me a good drum also in a right price. I personally like this poem because I love to play drum.
I hope you understand my feeling about this Poem.
Shakespearean
The poem named POEM, is a poem when I was writing these many poems. I had to think very much on writing all these poems because each and every poem needs ideas not just simple ones but mostly complicated ideas. I think everybody agrees with this poem because no student likes to make long boring poems, but I still enjoyed in writing this poem because I could actually express my personal feelings when I'm writing poems.
2Free style poems
Rhyming:
FRIENDS
Friends never betray each other.
Also plays together.
Our friendship is way more heavier than a feather.
And also Heavier than a paper.
We all have minds that are similar.
MY DOG
Non-Rhyming:
My dog always barks.
He loves going to parks.
Everywhere he leaves claw marks scares the apartment clarks.
Scared to go in the darks.
The poem "FRIENDS" is my favourite poem until now. I describe the ways friends are and our friendships. If you are a real friend, you will never betray each other also. and real friends also cheer each other up when they are sad. That's what i think about true friends I think.
What do you think? What are friends for you? I think this poem has true facts about friends.
Friendships last for ever too.
FRIENDS
Friends never betray each other.
Also plays together.
Our friendship is way more heavier than a feather.
And also Heavier than a paper.
We all have minds that are similar.
MY DOG
Non-Rhyming:
My dog always barks.
He loves going to parks.
Everywhere he leaves claw marks scares the apartment clarks.
Scared to go in the darks.
The poem "FRIENDS" is my favourite poem until now. I describe the ways friends are and our friendships. If you are a real friend, you will never betray each other also. and real friends also cheer each other up when they are sad. That's what i think about true friends I think.
What do you think? What are friends for you? I think this poem has true facts about friends.
Friendships last for ever too.
2011년 3월 11일 금요일
JIKS ~~ Acrostic POEM
6 Acrostic poems:
1. C-chan my best friend
H-helps friends all the time
A-acts strange sometimes
N-never gets mad at others
2. P-personel
E-educational tool used for
N-note taking
3. B-boring
O-object
O-only
K-known for reading
4. B-boys
A-and
G-girls need this for going to school
5. S-some place
C-cruel like
H-hell
O-only where
O-"orang pintar"go to
L-learn
6. T-totally
E-evil
A-and
C-child hating and too strict people that are usually
H-ated by
E-every single students
R-ecently also
The Poem CHAN is an Acrostic poem written by me. Chan is my best friend in school. He is very funny and loves to help people. We sometimes get to fight but after a fight, we come closer each other and our friendship gets bigger. I think Chan is a very nice friend and I think that every one has a friend like Chan. He always gets rid of my stress when I'm in a bad mood.
1. C-chan my best friend
H-helps friends all the time
A-acts strange sometimes
N-never gets mad at others
2. P-personel
E-educational tool used for
N-note taking
3. B-boring
O-object
O-only
K-known for reading
4. B-boys
A-and
G-girls need this for going to school
5. S-some place
C-cruel like
H-hell
O-only where
O-"orang pintar"go to
L-learn
6. T-totally
E-evil
A-and
C-child hating and too strict people that are usually
H-ated by
E-every single students
R-ecently also
The Poem CHAN is an Acrostic poem written by me. Chan is my best friend in school. He is very funny and loves to help people. We sometimes get to fight but after a fight, we come closer each other and our friendship gets bigger. I think Chan is a very nice friend and I think that every one has a friend like Chan. He always gets rid of my stress when I'm in a bad mood.
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